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All formal essays should follow MLA style guidelines for formatting        
Organization        
Introduction Review funnel introduction: Use of questions, quotations, or definitions as attention-getter is no longer acceptable.  Explain how to turn these into appropriate statements. Use a proper funnel introduction. Use a proper funnel introduction; introduce varying form to match thesis, task, and style Expect mastery of funnel introduction or alternative introduction style.
Thesis Statement Recognize clear and concise thesis statements. Write a clear and concise self-generated  thesis statement based on a suggested topic. Introduce and practice writing defendable, one to two sentences, self-generated thesis statement. Expect mastery of defendable, one to two sentences, self-generated thesis statement.
         
Topic sentences Expect topic sentence to state main idea. Introduce connecting topic sentence to thesis. Review connecting each topic sentence to thesis while introducing main idea. Expect topic sentences to connect to thesis and introduce the main idea. Expect topic sentences to connect to thesis and introduce the main idea.
Sentence Order Review logical sentence order in a paragraph or essay Master logical sentence order in paragraph and essay Master logical sentence order in paragraph and essay Master logical sentence order in paragraph and essay
Transitions between paragraphs Introduce advanced transitions. (No "first, second, third" etc.) Place transition in topic sentence only Review advanced transitions between paragraphs. Expect advanced transitions between paragraphs. Expect advanced transitions between paragraphs.
Transitions within paragraphs Introduce conjunctive adverbs or phrases to transition throughout paragraph (ex. therefore, however); stress importance of logical connections when a conjunctive adverb is not appropriate Review and use conjunctive adverbs or phrases to transition throughout paragraph (ex. therefore, however) or other appropriate transition. Expect proper use of conjunctive adverbs or phrases to transition throughout paragraph (ex. therefore, however) or other appropriate transition. Expect mastery of conjunctive adverbs or phrases to transition throughout paragraph (ex. therefore, however) or other appropriate transition.
Use of examples Identify/define concrete examples for use in body paragraphs.  Introduce avoidance of  plot summary. Independently find concrete examples and use in body paragraphs.  Do not use plot summary. Independently find concrete examples and use in body paragraphs.  Do not use plot summary. Independently find concrete examples and use in body paragraphs.  Do not use plot summary.
Lead-in to quotes Introduce lead-ins to a cited quote, use by the end of the year. Develop use of contextual lead-ins to cited quotes.  Introduce use of signal phrases (Ex. Critic Claudia Johnson stated…) Develop use of contextual lead-ins to cited quotes, and continue use of signal phrases. Master use of signal phrases and contextual lead-ins to cited quotes.
Single and double quotation marks introduce proper use of a quote within a quote review proper use of a quote within a quote expect proper use of a quote within a quote expect proper use of a quote within a quote
MLA mechanics for citations A/CP: Introduce basic format for punctuation.                   H: Introduce basic format for punctuation, ellipses, brackets, and use of partial quotes. A/CP: Use basic format for punctuation.  Introduce ellipses, brackets, and use of partial quotes.                     H: Practice and use basic format for punctuation, ellipses, brackets, and partial quotes.  Introduce block quote form. A/CP: Expect use of proper punctuation for quotes, ellipses, brackets, and partial quotes.  Introduce block quote form.                                    H: Expect mastery of above, and practice block quote form.                      CP/H: Expect mastery of proper punctuation for quotes, ellipses, brackets, and partial quotes.  Expect use of proper block quote form when necessary and if appropriate for assignment.
Primary and secondary quote incorporation Identify appropriate primary quotations to support given topic / thesis Identify appropriate primary and secondary quotations to support given topic / thesis depending on essay assignment Expect appropriate primary quotations to support given topic / thesis; review and use appropriate secondary quotations depending on essay assignment; introduce paraphrasing Expect appropriate primary and secondary quotations to support given topic / thesis depending on essay assignment; review and use paraphrasing
Conclusion paragraph Review reverse funnel conclusion, including rewording thesis, reviewing main points, and purpose of closing sentence.  Expect use of reverse funnel conclusion.  Review purpose of closing sentence (call to action; illumination). Expect use of reverse funnel conclusion.   Expect use of reverse funnel conclusion.
STYLE        
Maintaining academic language Avoid slang, sexist language, clichés, abbreviations, contractions and colloquialisms Avoid slang, sexist language, clichés, abbreviations, contractions and colloquialisms Avoid slang, sexist language, clichés, abbreviations, contractions and colloquialisms Avoid slang, sexist language, clichés, abbreviations, contractions and colloquialisms
word choice Review appropriate word choice; use the word or phrase most consistent with the style & tone of the essay; avoid vague language (thing, it)  Use appropriate word choice; use the word or phrase most consistent with the style & tone of the essay; avoid vague language (thing, it)  Use appropriate word choice; use the word or phrase most consistent with the style & tone of the essay; avoid vague language (thing, it)  Expect mastery of appropriate word choice; use the word or phrase most consistent with the style & tone of the essay; avoid vague language (thing, it) 
Point of View introduce use of formal third person for essays; first person only in narrative; and no second person Expect use of appropriate point of view Expect use of appropriate point of view Expect use of appropriate point of view
Verb Tense Introduce use of present tense when writing about literature and use of consistent verb tense based on writing assignment Review use of present tense when writing about literature and use of consistent verb tense based on writing assignment Expect use of present tense when writing about literature and use of consistent verb tense based on writing assignment Expect use of present tense when writing about literature and use of consistent verb tense based on writing assignment
Voice Honors: introduce active vs. passive voice H: review active vs. passive      CP: introduce active vs. passive H: expect appropriate use       CP: review appropriate use      A: introduce active vs. passive Expect appropriate use of active vs. passive voice
Sentence variety Introduce varying sentence structure Review and use varying sentence structure Expect varied sentence structure Expect varied sentence structure
GRAMMAR & Usage        
run-ons/ fragments Expect mastery of complete sentences Expect mastery of complete sentences Expect mastery of complete sentences Expect mastery of complete sentences; advanced classes may teach purposeful fragments
spelling/homonyms Students must use spell-check correctly.  Students must also edit writing visually for homonym or other word-choice errors. Students must use spell-check correctly.  Students must also edit writing visually for homonym or other word-choice errors. Students must use spell-check correctly.  Students must also edit writing visually for homonym or other word-choice errors. Students must use spell-check correctly.  Students must also edit writing visually for homonym or other word-choice errors.
Agreement: subject/verb and pronoun/antecedent review and expect use by the end of the year expect proper agreement expect proper agreement; review proper use of "who" and "whom" expect proper agreement
capitalization Expect mastery of capitalization. Expect mastery of capitalization. Expect mastery of capitalization. Expect mastery of capitalization.
Parallel sentence structure                                 Introduce parallel sentence structure Practice parallel structure; expect proper use by the end of the year  Mastery of parallel sentence structure
PUNCTUATION        
comma Review comma rules: introductory phrases; conjunctions; and lists. Review comma rules: participles, gerunds, appositives; introductory phrases; conjunctions; and lists. Review comma rules: participles, gerunds, appositives; introductory phrases; conjunctions; and lists. Expect appropriate use of commas with participles, gerunds, appositives; introductory phrases; conjunctions; and lists.
Apostrophe Expect appropriate usage Expect appropriate usage Expect appropriate usage Expect appropriate usage
colon / semi-colon Introduce  Introduce  Introduce proper use and practice Practice proper use and expect by the end of the year
Research Process        
Pre-writing strategies Introduce MLA outline  Demonstrate knowledge of strategies needed to prepare a research report (brainstorming, web, outlines, free-write); practice use of MLA outline Develop a research plan using multiple forms of data. Demonstrate knowledge of strategies needed to prepare a research report (brainstorming, web, outlines, free-write);  Independently develop a research plan using multiple forms of data. Demonstrate knowledge of strategies needed to prepare a research report (brainstorming, web, outlines, free-write); practice use of MLA outline
Source Selection Required library orientation Choose and evaluate primary & secondary sources (print & non-print) for a variety of purposes with teacher guidance Choose and evaluate primary & secondary sources (print & non-point) for a variety of purposes Choose and evaluate primary & secondary sources (print & non-point) for a variety of purposes
Revisions  revision required (peer editing, self editing, writing center, teacher editing) revision required (peer editing, self editing, writing center, teacher editing) revision required (peer editing, self editing, writing center, teacher editing) revision required (peer editing, self editing, writing center, teacher editing)
Works Cited Introduce MLA works cited page (if necessary) Review MLA works cited page  Review MLA works cited page for a variety of materials Expect proper MLA works cited page

 

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